Obviously,
The woman lacked brains.
How could she not
Appreciate
The personal
Attention to detail
Inherent
In a bouquet of
Limbs torn from trolls?
Yes, the oath to
Out-drink the entire lodge
In her honor
Might have been
Ill-professed,
But couldn’t she see
The tender heart
His ripped frame concealed?
Unperturbed,
He prepared to try again.
Perhaps a rousing
War song, sung
Beneath her window,
Would win his lady’s love.
Comments
Apr 5 2009
Typical male. All testosterone and war.
Apr 5 2009
*smiles* this one is -always- good for a laugh
Apr 9 2009
An interesting topic, though I'm unsure why some words are lines unto themselves. The random breaking up of the poem doesn't seem to have much point.
Kudos for exploring an odd topic though.
I'd be flattered.
<3