The Leopard and The Moth



You’ve got snow leopard eyes.
I’m an
Oldwife Underwing
Perched on the last wheat stems,
Sunning myself
Before the cold world sleeps.
Frostbound tigress,
Prowl under the bridge of trolls:
The toll is a knife in your mouth,
And I’d break my heart on your
Headstone
If I could just find the perfect
Elegy to sing for you.
The ice on the reeds
At the river’s bank
Melts beneath your breath.
I want that breath on my neck–
Sandpaper tongue–
And teeth to reap
The red grains from it.

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T
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I am not quite sure what to make of this, except it gives me chills.

Raeven
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@T: agreed. it's even creepier when you can add a personal meaning to the symbol set

Diana
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Nice imagery, but I'm afraid the overall point of the poem is completely lost on me. I seemed to have lost it somewhere, though I'm not sure if I could pinpoint where.

It could have started with the uncertainty of what an Oldwife Underwing is. The preciseness makes me wonder if there's a reference I'm missing.