You’ve got snow leopard eyes.
I’m an
Oldwife Underwing
Perched on the last wheat stems,
Sunning myself
Before the cold world sleeps.
Frostbound tigress,
Prowl under the bridge of trolls:
The toll is a knife in your mouth,
And I’d break my heart on your
Headstone
If I could just find the perfect
Elegy to sing for you.
The ice on the reeds
At the river’s bank
Melts beneath your breath.
I want that breath on my neck–
Sandpaper tongue–
And teeth to reap
The red grains from it.
Comments
Apr 5 2009
I am not quite sure what to make of this, except it gives me chills.
Apr 5 2009
@T: agreed. it's even creepier when you can add a personal meaning to the symbol set
Apr 9 2009
Nice imagery, but I'm afraid the overall point of the poem is completely lost on me. I seemed to have lost it somewhere, though I'm not sure if I could pinpoint where.
It could have started with the uncertainty of what an Oldwife Underwing is. The preciseness makes me wonder if there's a reference I'm missing.