If a poet translates hearts,
Then I am a poor poet.
My heart is a false cognate:
A word laid like bait
To ensnare your interest
And lead you to a conclusion
You were better off without.
I love the idea and the execution of it, but I have issue with your choice of the word 'cognate'. Even after looking it up, it doesn't seem to make sense used in context.
Comments
Apr 5 2009
wow - i just read this one right after lovesong, and it hit me right in the gut >< way to break the spell
Apr 5 2009
Well said Gabriel.
Apr 9 2009
I love the idea and the execution of it, but I have issue with your choice of the word 'cognate'. Even after looking it up, it doesn't seem to make sense used in context.
Other than that, wonderful piece of art.
ah, you, you are good for the mind Gabriel