Disconnect



The telephone continues to ring.
It's not that no one wants to answer it,
Or that the call doesn't want to be answered,
But everyone in this room has busy hands.

The mother's fists beating
Her breathing son's chest and his hands
Tearing at the hair on his head.
The nurse's hands pressing
The silent brother's chest. The nurse's hands pressing
The silent brother's chest. The nurse's hands pressing
The silent brother's chest.
The orderly's hands guiding the mother
And her breathing son into the hall.

The doctor's hands are just     too     slick.

The telephone continues to ring.
Ring. Ring. Ring.

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Lamasym
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Haunting...I would be in that room...after I finish school...its sad to read it from someone else'e point of view.

Diana
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The repetition goes a long way towards making the piece complete, I like the way that it reminds me of the resuscitating movements. Though I wonder at the spaces around the word 'too', combined with 'just', it carries it an extra beat that makes me stutter over it when reading it through. A powerful piece though.