Boys Are Stupid
I walked up for a refill of coffee
And in the beat I missed somewhere
You said,
Boys are stupid.
I agreed with you–
How stupid must I have been
To never notice
Your ice-blue eyes;
To never notice
Your peppermint tongue;
I apologize for
The fallacies of my gender.
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Apr 5 2009
If only other men were so honest
Apr 9 2009
Another interesting piece, I like how you portray this from the other side.
I'd recommend possibly breaking up lines 5-12, though. Possibly a semi-colon after eyes and a period after tongue.
Mar 24 2009
I never actually noticed the lack of punctuation this piece had. Fixed.
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