Absolution



“I want to save you,”
The pastor said,
“I want to rescue you
From the temptations
You are so prone to.
Won’t you ask for an absolution
or two?”
She wiped her lips and said,
“No, but thank you,
I’m quite fine as I am.”

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Raeven
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ack, what a tease of a doorway! i would love to walk beyond these doors and know what went on here

T
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Hahaha now that's a new definition of "Hail Marys".

Diana
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Short, sweet, and just bare enough to leave a tantalizing amount to the imagination. A nice piece overall.

Neverwhere74
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Wow, very good. If church was like this I'd go back lol !

Miladysa (not verified)
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What a story there is there!

Raeven
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amusingly enough, it now reminds me of that scene from V for Vendetta - granted only because I just watched the movie, but still Tongue

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